I like how the dialogue is spoken. The the way it's read is charming in a unique way. I think that's really hard to do but it's clearly possible. The way the hair is stylised and how big the eyes are are my favorite details. The grainy filter over the video makes it feel like I'm watching something on a tv, that's awesome.
The backgrounds are also really well done! So many that are only on screen for a few seconds.
Aw and rewatching it, I noticed Victor says no after Audrey mentions Vera, who is indeed the secret crush. That's a nice detail.
Great work all around I really enjoyed this